By law all politicians are to be locked up for their own good. This comes after a series of tests that show that they are 798% more likely to commit suicide than the average dentist. However many flaws that can be found with these tests, such as the fact that their is a 38% chance of a dentist commiting suicide and there are no cases of mass suicide in the last millenium, let alone the fact that they hae no reason to commit suicide , it passed unaminously amoung the general population and as this is a democrocy all of them have been rounded up or sacked.
PLease give new topics and any constructive criticism
___________________________ We're all gonna die anyway ___________________________
The statistics alone appear to prove the case for locking up politicians if you ask me!
RE: "constructive criticism", I think you should spend a little longer on sentence structure and making sure that the reader understands you. For instance, if you re-read it you'll notice that it's grammatically unclear as to who should be "rounded up or sacked", the politicians or the dentists.
Finally, run it through a spell checker before posting (you can do that without leaving the forum by using the button next to "Post Reply") and again, it will make it easier to read.
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